They fought their way out, words covered in margarine from their journey to the frying pan, and dripping hot fat as they made their way out from beneath the bacon wedges. They were grilled, basted and tortured, juicy drippings straight off the rack allowing a kind of wine-and-turkey smell to penetrate the house. The words kept right on coming, spewing forth as though out of a sewer, forgetting themselves in their anxiety, tripping over one another as they tried to see the pretty little girl in the white dress with the blue flower in her hair.
I saw the words; they sunk into my skin. I looked at them, scarcely there, transparent, translucent, within the blue blood that ran in my veins. They swam, forgotten, beneath the opaque veins and blood vessels, bursting into being like an aneurysm, struggling to survive like a a man with smoker's lung trying to breathe. Eventually, they choked me to death. But first came my little boy and the effervescent words hanging on the edge of his spangled dress, smoky, acrid, a little too sweet: "Have you got a cigarette?"
9 comments:
OK - that's just wierd
Chana is promoting vice.
She is a member of the squid.
This post lends itself to broad interpretations, but the title reminds me of my favorite part from "The Walrus and The Carpenter" by Lewis Carroll :)
"The time has come," the Walrus said,
"To talk of many things:
Of shoes--and ships--and sealing-wax--
Of cabbages--and kings--
And why the sea is boiling hot--
And whether pigs have wings."
http://www.jabberwocky.com/carroll/walrus.html
the image
explained by the last line
may evoke
angelas ashes by frank mccourt
nice genre! keep it up
really like the choice of words.
got no idea what you're talkin about :-)
I thought I got this until I read all the comments saying they didn't understand it. But if I do understand what you are saying, then I am just as sickened by what you are sickened by.
wow what a shame is what i see in this maybe i'm dead wrong seems like purity being torn and choked upon by society like a cigarette thanks tl bb
Ben Rosenfeld
I was so there! ;-)
(Reminds me of Tom Robbins' construction of sentences, btw.)
seems Joe agrees with me so not so dead wrong huh thanks a ton tc tl bb
Ben Rosenfeld
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