You've all heard of the book Goodnight Moon and its beautiful poem.
It seems to me that there ought to be a book entitled Good Morning Sun.
It's not quite the same and yet I think it would be beautiful to awake in the morning and to greet all the objects in one's room.
In the little dorm room
There was a cell-phone
And a blue balloon
And a picture of—
A woman with a golden spoon
And there were three tired girls combing out curls
And a box of dishes
And forgotten wishes
And some toiletries
And a pair of skinned knees
And a comb and a brush and a bowl full of dust
And a tired teenager who said “No, I must—“
Good morning room
Good morning sun
Good morning woman with a golden spoon
Good morning light
and the blue balloon
Good morning girls
Good morning curls
Good morning dishes
Good morning wishes
Good morning toiletries
And good morning skinned knees
Good morning notebooks
And dazed sleepy looks
Good morning dorm
And the daily norm
Good morning comb
And good morning brush
Good morning teenager who is saying “I must—“
Good morning clouds
Good morning air
Good morning noises everywhere
7 comments:
I love it! Particularly the "I must" which I assume was meant to sound like mush.
Well you know what they say about people who assume... After checking with the original, I guess the dust is the mush and the "I must" is the "hush". :-) My bad.
I love this!
Yay! Chana! This is brilliant! Can I show it to my Writing Picture Books teacher? She'd love it!
I really like this poem. :)
GOOD MORNING, CHANA.
love it! wow.
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